Hello guys here a new blog i hope u both will like it.You can call me Maganda.I am writing it from Rochester NY but i am from Turkey / Kahramanmaras.I came USA with an group so we are 6 person.4 student and samet.tugba.I hate using that word ' teacher ' or ' ogretmen . hoca ' (same words ) so i'm happy with my current situation.You can ask me to it's reason.I like snowboarding and windsurfing.My summer plan was going to izmir for windsurfing before when my dear mom insisted me for come here.I hope i will test my speed again this winter.My last one was about 43.75 mph it is not bad for first training on the normal pist (slalom around to other people ) :D .Yea it's me.
Three interesting thinks about me :
1: I am really master gamer
2:I love girls like chevy , mercedes and beamer.I have driven cars completely since when i was 10 y.o.
3:i love that word : adrenaline
Hello, Sinan,
ReplyDeleteI like your fish widget over on the left. I fed them so much they are getting fat. Your first post for a grade is supposed to be a paragraph about you. Your post is about you, and it is a very clear list. But, alas, a list is not a paragraph. So, please write a cohesive paragraph about yourself so I can grade it. Right now your grade for Post #1 is 65%. You can improve it if you do Post #1 by the end of the day on Monday, 7-25-11. You are very smart, so I think you can do this assignment with few problems. Thank you!
Your sentences are well written. You have a solid paragraph. I think you could use more adjectives and adverbs to make your paragraph more vivid.
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ReplyDeleteHi,Sinan,
ReplyDeleteI like you article!I know something interesting about you.And here are some suggestions for your writing:
You wrote"...i'm happy...".Better:...I'm happy...